Following further feedback and development, we now have version 3 of the script.
- I have adjusted the wording slightly on the teaser.
- In the first section of the Steals of the Season section I have taken out the second example of plaid so that now the only example is the Bay City Rollers. In the previous version of the script we had included the example of Vivienne Westwood, however, Del suggested that the audience may be expecting to see an image on screen as an example. We are unable to get a copyright free image of this so the only option was to cut this out of the script. We have our own image of the plaid trend which will still be on screen when the Bay City Rollers are mentioned so this won't have the same issue.
- For the men's sportswear trend I have removed the word "athleisure" as this proved difficult to pronounce. Although we haven't rehearsed with our presenters yet, the majority of people in the year either struggled to pronounce the word or didn't know what it meant. To avoid this confusion for the audience I have removed the word.
- Now that the presenter challenge VT has been filmed, I have added in the presenter challenge studio reveal. This includes the details and prices of the outfit but Adeline's reaction will be ad libbed.
- We have one contributor confirmed for the fashion fails segment - Dave Joslin. There are two different options for his fashion fail - a shirt and tie combination or some funky patterned shorts. I have scripted this section featuring the shorts as this is the only photo received so far but this could change. We have yet to confirm the second fashion fails contributor.
- I have also updated the link between the fashion fails audience segment and the VT to include the VT contributor's name now that this VT has also been filmed. Adding this detail to the link helps the dialogue to flow better and make the whole show flow smoothly.
- Melissa did the second half of the script. Both interview sections have been refined.
As with the first and second script, we both looked over the script as a whole to make sure there is consistency through the segments. Melissa helped write the opening of the show and I helped phrase the interview questions.
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