Tuesday 21 November 2017

FICTION ADAPTATION: Experimental Short (Despair) Feedback

The feedback for my short experimental sequence was generally very positive.

The sound design was quite strong - it helped to convey the story without narrating it. It gives context as to why the character is in despair and also helps to enhance the emotion in the piece.

The upside down sequence works well to throw the audience. It helps to convey that his world has been turned upside down. It could work well as a motif.

The different opacity shots worked well - helped create the confused / dazed / despair feeling.

The colour of the sequence worked well - the blue tone helped to suggest despair.

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